the weight of the pen
You never speak of the weight of it,so light at first when first you seize it,and through this instrumentflows the thoughts, feelings, cravings, greivings,half dreams---that it seems like...
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Hi Gala, I do enjoy how your mind works, good job dear friend, BG
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I love the metaphores you use to impart such deep feelings here in this piece. It is an amazing, vast universe within ones' mind and soul that comes forth in the form of poetry, and you have expressed...
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Yes, indeed, this is a fine evocation of the magic of the creation of a poem. Much enjoyed.Davie
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Thank you gentlemen...there are a few poets who never fail to steal my breath away---this was written for them...
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words can have enormous power ... and the right ones can touch the soul and leave their mark forever ... for most of us, writing is a baring ... and a sharing ... of the inner self -- the heart and...
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Gala this is wonderfulmade me smile and nod in understandingsome do indeed take my mind awayand often you are one of those thank you for that poetess^_^~ Secret Desire ~whispers from the soulquiet yet...
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Well said...the process is sometimes simple, but more often the birthing takes a lot of effort...and yet, the burden remains light...great tribute piece...Every new beginning comes fromsome other...
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Delicious exploration of the relationship between the writer and the word; lovely imagery and use of metaphor - beautifully done! "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a...
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Beth...Thank you lady!Secret---girl, I will get a swelled head!Paul...thank you kindly sir...And thanks to you Valoe...you are too kind!
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Nice deep work, i agree the metaphores are awesome in your piece. This is a A+ piece!-JMBI don't have to think. I only have to do it. The results are always perfect.And that's old news...Would you...
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weighty thoughts weaved with much elegance in this piece Gala.. A wonderful poem to come back to..enjoyed every line, thank youalice
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